Hey, guys. Just to let you know that your comments don't fall in a bottomless pit of news editing and editorialism.
Not my best work, and not only do I understand where most of you are coming from, I agree with most of what has been said. Slight side-line in this article - the delivery wasn't as sound as it could have been. And those parentheticals and run-in-sentences could have been avoided.
Anyway, problem acknowledged, and rest assured this will inform future articles. Piece by piece we'll reach an agreement between editor and TPUers =)